Thus, the FSR, as
with any such journal that casts a wide net, with less of an emphasis on a
particular poetics, is a mixed bag.
There is a lot of work here that I like.
Barbara DeCesare’s poem for Babe Ruth offers irony and imagism in lines
like, “A thousand people swim dark water. / You take baseballs, glowing white,
to the shore // and hit them, two or three hanging in the air at a time…” Nikia S. Leopold’s “The Miracle” is a pleasant
reflection on Italy,
ending “We found a place / to lie together full length.... / I swear by San
Gersolé / our murmurs / made that fountain weep.” A couple of poets I liked happen to have been
published by presses who have published me as well — Drucilla Wall’s “Laurel
Oak” includes some strong nature imagery which is subverted by juxtaposition
with technology and subtle humor.
Jessica Fenlon’s “seed station” subverts its imagism with popular
culture: a cardinal is described as having a “tweed jacket [and] / feather
mohawk.” Edgar Gabriel Silex’s “Mother’s
Day Poem” exhibits an interest in use of language more than some in this issue,
as does Chris Toll, who, his bio note unfortunately states, recently died.
I can’t quite figure out why Tony Barnstone’s “Samsara” and
“Wheel” are dubbed short stories in the Editor’s Note, when they appear very
obviously in verse lines. I’m all for
blurring the boundaries of genre, but this didn’t quite seem to make sense — they
appear as prosey narrative poems but would certainly read just as well as
actual short stories. On the other hand, I
imagine Barnstone knows exactly what he’s doing and the matter is simply one of
terminology.
Juliana Spallholtz’s “Strangers” works nicely as the prose-poem that it
clearly is, its spare “sentences” emphasizing the piece’s sense of
alienation. Naturally, there are some
pieces here that didn’t especially appeal to me, also. Those who know me or read this blog know that
I often tend to prefer work that is, as some might call it, “difficult,” and
the Free State Review editors clearly
are interested in more accessible work.
But this is a sturdy debut. I would actually like to see the journal in future issues
narrow its focus a bit, to foster more of a sense of identity for itself in
relation to the type of poetics it is interested in, even if it were to veer
further away from my own aesthetic concerns.
In any case, the Free
State Review is an active force and is organizing a number of readings,
including one in Pittsburgh on
Wednesday 4/17 at the East End Book Exchange, Bloomfield
(4754 Liberty Ave.), from 7:00-9:00 pm.
There will be four readers, and admission is free. It promises to be a worthy event.

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